Professional editing could enhance the book's consistency, especially regarding details like the presence of sunshine described in one scene but not depicted. Another inconsistency arises when the owner returns; while the text suggests her happiness, the accompanying illustration portrays a different scenario, causing a disconnect for the reader.
Overall, Charron presents a colorful and easy-to-read tale that, with a bit of polish, could truly shine. Despite its flaws, "Milo and Jo" remains a sweet and enjoyable read.
Add comment
Comments